نگارش آیلتس قسمت دوم – نمونه ۱۵

 

نگارش یا رایتینگ ” Writing ” آیلتس یکی از مهم ترین بخش های آزمون آیلتس می باشد. به منظور هر چه قوی تر شدن در این مهارت سعی کنید مطالعه آزاد داشته باشید (به ساختار جملات توجه کنید) ، زیاد بنویسید و رایتینگ های دیگر را نیز مطالعه کنید. در اینجا یک نمونه نگارش آیلتس با موضوع ” تحصیلات رایگان ”  آورده شده است سعی کنید به ساختار پاگراف بندی و ساختار جملات و لغات بکار برده شده دقت کنید.

Sample Essays:

IELTS Writing Sample #15

Should education be free?

All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The opinion that every citizen should have the right to study at school or university for free is very controversial one. Those, who disagree, refer to enormous expenditures of government in case of establishing such laws. Although, I hold the viewpoint that not charging people for education could become very beneficial for country and its economy.

First, young people from poor families could be very smart. Looking back to history and biographies of distinguished people, raised in poverty can illustrate this best. Making schooling available only for fortunate is not fair. Moreover, the state well-being could also be affected, because there would be a lack of talented specialists, whose skills was not discovered and developed by proper training.

Another advantage of making education free of charge is happiness of the nation. Inability of individual to collect amount of money needed to pay school or university fees cause stress and anxiety of the middle-class society, which can even keep them from having children. Nowadays we can see that the lowest birthrate is in countries where prices of enrollment to highest education institutions are very high. This clearly indicates the fact that citizens of rich countries do not feel able to provide their future offspring proper education.

Finally, nothing seems to be more beneficial to economy than intelligent nation. Free courses and study programs can prepare excellent specialists, who would work to bring profit themselves and hence their country. That would surely compensate most expenses of state budget caused by education of no charge. To sum up, even though making all schools free can be very expensive for state economy, advantages are invaluable. After several years such improvements would bring fruits of happy, intelligent nation confident about its future.

Overall, looks like a band 7+ essay.